From 6fb39257554ff42768a38caf790ef223c42d6705 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ben Millwood Date: Sat, 3 Oct 2009 11:21:34 +0000 Subject: My occasionally pedantic copyediting of risujin's help menu --- ui/help.txt | 19 ++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) (limited to 'ui') diff --git a/ui/help.txt b/ui/help.txt index fb215362..3a0f1587 100644 --- a/ui/help.txt +++ b/ui/help.txt @@ -14,10 +14,10 @@ "* Help menu (you're looking at it!)\n" "* UI health cross icon shows regen speed\n" "* Human UI health cross glows from medkit\n" - "* Human item list wider and won't hide items\n" - "* Regular Basilik benefits from booster\n" - "* Lucifer Cannon overcharge heard by others\n" - "* Credits for de-creeping buildables\n" + "* Human item list is wider and won't hide items\n" + "* Regular Basilik benefits from booster regen\n" + "* Lucifer Cannon overcharge can be heard by others\n" + "* You are awarded credits for de-creeping buildables\n" } "Alien Healing" { @@ -49,10 +49,11 @@ { "The Tyrant is now a weaker class as its health has been lowered and " "turret damage is greater. To counter this, Tyrants can charge for longer " - "periods of time and can crush any Humans they land on top of. Remember " - "that because trample takes longer to charge, you need to let go early " - "for a quick charge. The Tyrant's healing aura has been removed, find a " - "booster or a basilisk to heal faster." + "periods of time, hit targets multiple times in a single charge, " + "and crush any Humans they land on top of. Remember that because trample " + "takes longer to charge, you need to let go early for a quick charge. " + "The Tyrant's healing aura has been removed, find a booster or a basilisk " + "to heal faster." } "Sprint / Dodge" { @@ -96,7 +97,7 @@ "Contributing developers:\n\n" "Norfenstein\n" "Tony J. White\n" - "Ben ''Benmachine'' Millwood\n" + "Ben Millwood (''benmachine'')\n" "Michael ''Risujin'' Levin\n" "Chris ''Lakitu7'' Schwarz\n" "Roman ''Kevlarman'' Tetelman\n" -- cgit