* (bug 2803) Tighten some spelling/grammar/typos in various places (Phil Bordelon, Ben Millwood)

4 files changed, 11 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/src/cgame/cg_servercmds.c b/src/cgame/cg_servercmds.c
index b9c310eb..422bdb75 100644
--- a/src/cgame/cg_servercmds.c
+++ b/src/cgame/cg_servercmds.c
@@ -579,14 +579,14 @@ void CG_Menu( int menu, int arg )
     
     case MN_B_NOROOM:
       longMsg   = "There is no room to build here. Move until the structure turns "
-                  "translucent green indicating a valid build location.";
+                  "translucent green, indicating a valid build location.";
       shortMsg  = "There is no room to build here";
       type      = DT_BUILD;
       break;
 
     case MN_B_NORMAL:
       longMsg   = "Cannot build on this surface. The surface is too steep or "
-                  "unsuitable to build on. Please choose another site for this "
+                  "unsuitable for building. Please choose another site for this "
                   "structure.";
       shortMsg  = "Cannot build on this surface";
       type      = DT_BUILD;
@@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ void CG_Menu( int menu, int arg )
 
     case MN_H_NOPOWERHERE:
       longMsg   = "There is no power here. If available, a Repeater may be used to "
-                  "transmit power to this location.";
+                  "transmit power, to this location.";
       shortMsg  = "There is no power here";
       type      = DT_BUILD;
       break;
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ void CG_Menu( int menu, int arg )
 
     case MN_A_NOOVMND:
       longMsg   = "There is no Overmind. An Overmind must be built to control "
-                  "the structure you tried to place";
+                  "the structure you tried to place.";
       shortMsg  = "There is no Overmind";
       type      = DT_BUILD;
       break;
@@ -782,15 +782,14 @@ void CG_Menu( int menu, int arg )
 
     case MN_A_NOEROOM:
       longMsg   = "There is no room to evolve here. Move away from walls or other "
-                   "nearby objects and try again.";
+                  "nearby objects and try again.";
       shortMsg  = "There is no room to evolve here";
       type      = DT_ARMOURYEVOLVE;
       break;
 
     case MN_A_TOOCLOSE:
       longMsg   = "This location is too close to the enemy to evolve. Move away "
-                  "until you are no longer aware of the enemy's presence and try "
-                  "again.";
+                  "from the enemy's presence and try again.";
       shortMsg  = "This location is too close to the enemy to evolve";
       type      = DT_ARMOURYEVOLVE;
       break;
diff --git a/src/cgame/cg_tutorial.c b/src/cgame/cg_tutorial.c
index 2dd5a5a2..bd41be2a 100644
--- a/src/cgame/cg_tutorial.c
+++ b/src/cgame/cg_tutorial.c
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ CG_AlienLevel0Text
 static void CG_AlienLevel0Text( char *text, playerState_t *ps )
 {
   Q_strcat( text, MAX_TUTORIAL_TEXT,
-      "Touch a human to damage it\n" );
+      "Touch humans to damage them\n" );
 
   Q_strcat( text, MAX_TUTORIAL_TEXT,
       va( "Press %s to walk on walls\n",
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ CG_AlienLevel1Text
 static void CG_AlienLevel1Text( char *text, playerState_t *ps )
 {
   Q_strcat( text, MAX_TUTORIAL_TEXT,
-      "Touch a human to grab it\n" );
+      "Touch humans to grab them\n" );
 
   Q_strcat( text, MAX_TUTORIAL_TEXT,
       va( "Press %s to swipe\n",
diff --git a/src/game/g_admin.c b/src/game/g_admin.c
index d7eae042..8c3e2c7e 100644
--- a/src/game/g_admin.c
+++ b/src/game/g_admin.c
@@ -2584,7 +2584,7 @@ qboolean G_admin_help( gentity_t *ent, int skiparg )
       {
         if( !G_admin_permission( ent, g_admin_cmds[ i ].flag[ 0 ] ) )
         {
-          ADMBP( va( "^3!help: ^7you have no permission to use '%s'\n",
+          ADMBP( va( "^3!help: ^7you do not have permission to use '%s'\n",
                    g_admin_cmds[ i ].keyword ) );
           ADMBP_end();
           return qfalse;
@@ -2605,7 +2605,7 @@ qboolean G_admin_help( gentity_t *ent, int skiparg )
       {
         if( !admin_command_permission( ent, g_admin_commands[ i ]->command ) )
         {
-          ADMBP( va( "^3!help: ^7you have no permission to use '%s'\n",
+          ADMBP( va( "^3!help: ^7you do not have permission to use '%s'\n",
                    g_admin_commands[ i ]->command ) );
           ADMBP_end();
           return qfalse;
diff --git a/src/game/g_cmds.c b/src/game/g_cmds.c
index deb45159..ae48940d 100644
--- a/src/game/g_cmds.c
+++ b/src/game/g_cmds.c
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ void Cmd_Kill_f( gentity_t *ent )
 {
   if( ent->client->ps.stats[ STAT_STATE ] & SS_HOVELING )
   {
-    trap_SendServerCommand( ent-g_entities, "print \"Leave the hovel first (use your destroy key)\n\"" );
+    trap_SendServerCommand( ent-g_entities, "print \"Leave the Hovel first (use your destroy key)\n\"" );
     return;
   }